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13 March 2006 @ 07:45 pm
Sparky story - Taking Care  
Title: Taking Care
Theme: #28 - Wada Calcium CD3
Category: Humor, Romance/Friendship
Rating: PG
Words: 522
Disclaimer: I don't own Stargate Atlantis or the characters. I'm just playing with them ;)
A/N: This was written for the 30_kisses community. In every of the 30 stories you have to include one kiss *grins*
A/N 2: Wada Calcium CD3 is a calcium supplement for the growing, the elderly, and those who don't get enough sunlight or fish.



"Here, take these."

In her field of vision a hand with two pills appeared, rolling them forth and back. Slowly her eyes followed the play of muscles, up to the face of person they belonged to.

"And these are...?"

"Pills." A grin spread over his face, making him look oh so much younger. She couldn't resist and had to smile back but not before rolling her eyes.

"I can see that. But what are they doing here?"

He hopped on her desk and scrutinized the pills for some seconds. Looking back at her, he offered them again.

"They want to be taken by you."

Faint blush creeped up to her cheeks and she had to avert her eyes from his knowing gaze. He knew exactly how to get her all flustered.

"Uhm, Colonel..." She fingered the edge of a report, trying desperately to find a way out of this... situation.

"Elizabeth, please, just take these and I'm gone."

Her head snapped up.

"John, I didn't... I don't..."

He gave her a reassuring smile, took gently her left hand and closed her fingers around the two pills.

"I know. And I know how much you hate pills and all that medical stuff. But you have to take care of you. You don't get enough sun cause you work every day in your office and Carson said you have a serious lack of calcium because of it. That's why you need to take the pills. And..."

John looked... unhappy as far as Elizabeth was able to tell. She didn't know that Carson had been talking to John about something like that. And what surprised her more was the fact that John apparently kept a close eye on her. She studied him as he went on about her carelessness and not for the first time she wondered what she had done to deserve such a good friend. She felt a smile tug at the corners of her lips as John gestured wildly and propped her head up on one hand. He was so cute.

"...and if you can't take care of yourself, I have to- What?" He stopped and eyed her suspiciously.

"Nothing. Just thinking how lucky I am."

"Huh?"

She stood up and moved to stand infront of him.

"Thank you, John. For taking care of me. Even if I don't really need it." At that part John's eyebrow rose and he looked awfully smug. She shot him a stern look which he ignored on purpose.

"You, Dr. Weir, are the best in taking care of others, especially those under your command. But as soon as you have to look after yourself... you suck."

Pretending to be outraged, she smacked him on the arm and popped the pills into her mouth. Grabbing the glass of water John handed her, she drank it up at once.

"See? Took care alright of the pills!" Leaning towards John, she ghosted a kiss on his cheek, then turned on her heels and strolled out of her office.

John just sat there dumbfounded for some seconds before he reacted.

"Hey, I think you need some other pills as well!"

~ fin ~

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Vicky: Lizvickysg1 on March 13th, 2006 07:17 pm (UTC)
Love the idea of John wanting to take care of Elizabeth!!
Mercy: Eizabeth - determinedmercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:07 pm (UTC)
When I saw that theme, the plot bunny of John caring for Liz jumped into my head ;)

Thanks!
jeepnyjeepny on March 13th, 2006 07:30 pm (UTC)
aww cute story :) love it!
Mercy: Atlantis - Red seamercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:10 pm (UTC)
♥ Thanky!
(no subject) - jeepny on March 15th, 2006 10:40 am (UTC) (Expand)
Quietly Bemusedquietlybemused on March 13th, 2006 07:43 pm (UTC)
Very cute. :) I adore comforting John.
Mercy: Sparky - Jump memercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:45 pm (UTC)
*loves your icon like woah*

Thanks, hon *hugs*
Root and Shaw....and then they done sex!: Shweir Angstkinky_carter on March 13th, 2006 08:01 pm (UTC)
Hehe, so cute, I love it!
Mercy: Fanfic posting...mercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you ♥
haildorothygale: S/W unresolved by lindir_daxhaildorothygale on March 13th, 2006 08:25 pm (UTC)
Hee, loved the tone of this. Short and sweet but not too sweet, I really like that it remained light and cute and innocent, with the peck on the cheek at the end.

Although dark, hot and dirty are definitely options I enjoy as well. Just fyi. :D
Mercy: Sparky - Against you and memercscilla on March 13th, 2006 08:32 pm (UTC)
Thanks ;)

Although dark, hot and dirty are definitely options I enjoy as well. Just fyi. :D

Hee, there are still 29 themes. I'm sure there will something dark/hot/dirty *grins*
Nerca Beyul: Sparky by MEnerca_beyul on March 13th, 2006 08:58 pm (UTC)
lol! Love it.
Mercy: Apple - blue applemercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks ^-^
Amiehipapheralkus on March 13th, 2006 09:17 pm (UTC)
Aw, that was sweet. John taking care of Elizabeth, that's something I'd like to see on the show *g*
Mercy: Sparky - Dinner invitationmercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:20 pm (UTC)
Maybe we will get a scene cause it's not too much and shippy ^-^

Thanks!
coexist_lovecoexist_love on March 13th, 2006 09:30 pm (UTC)
That was cute!! I think it was awesomely done.
Keep up the good work!!
It was so light and sweet and yet still had a Sparky tone to it.

PILLS!! YUCK! I side with Lizzie on that one.
Mercy: Elizabeth - Bite memercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:44 pm (UTC)
Your opinion means so much to my, hon *hugs* Thank you so much ♥

PILLS are the worst things ever *cringe*
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Solasola_tira on March 13th, 2006 09:51 pm (UTC)
Yeah, first Atlantis fanfic. so I'm lost now :D

And you will always be remembered as first ff in this fandom ;)
Mercy: Sam - remembermercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:57 pm (UTC)
Ohhh *feels special* hope you don't get too lost... *grins*

*loves you*
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ankareeda: pointofviewankareeda on March 13th, 2006 09:54 pm (UTC)
*wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* Wasn't that just darn cute?! *smiles like on dope* ;) *hihi*

*heart sighs*
Mercy: Mine Bodyguardmercscilla on March 13th, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)
My twin!!! I'm so happy you like it ♥ *pokes doped-Andy* *giggle*

We need some serious cute moments in the future ^-^
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duskwingsduskwings on March 13th, 2006 10:02 pm (UTC)
Cute! :D And if those calcium pills are anything like the ones that I've taken ... it's no wonder she isn't willing to take them. Chocolate calcium chews, on the other hand ... *is a sucker for chocolate*
Mercy: Muffin!!!mercscilla on March 13th, 2006 10:58 pm (UTC)
Chocolate calcium chews, on the other hand ... *is a sucker for chocolate*

YUMMY! Anything with chocolate and I'm your man. Girl, I mean *grins*
what a crazy random happenstance: rodney helloalianne on March 13th, 2006 10:09 pm (UTC)
ooh, yeah, doesn't she need more pills??? =D

this was so cute, nice job :)
Mercy: Sam - remembermercscilla on March 13th, 2006 10:59 pm (UTC)
*grins* yup, alot more pills!

Thanks ^-^
Kate: Weee!!!!kawaiix on March 13th, 2006 10:51 pm (UTC)
Oh, I feel horrible for not commenting here in a while. (LOL, and of course I start with the fic. XP)

I thought it was absolutely a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e!!! ^__^ The ending was priceless! XD Wonderful, wonderful fic! =)

Now, I'm off to read your other posts, lol. XD
Mercy: Sparky Kiss 2mercscilla on March 13th, 2006 11:01 pm (UTC)
RL is a bitch sometimes *huggles*

*blushes* Awwww, thank you so much, hon ♥ *loves you*
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Kryspeacelove_happy on March 14th, 2006 01:30 am (UTC)
great!! the last line made me chuckle hehehe. just lovely
Ashbarker9 on March 14th, 2006 01:40 am (UTC)
"Hey, I think you need some other pills as well!"

LOL! Keep trying, Shep! Cute and funny. Loved it.
Mercy: John - Gotchamercscilla on March 14th, 2006 05:33 pm (UTC)
*grins* Thanks ^-^